This project is all about defining points and the graphic relationship the points have with the frame.
I had come up with some ideas for points, as requested in project 16: seagulls on the beach; sheep in a field; daisies in the lawn; the moon in the sky or distant people on a mountainside, but instead opted for a brave lady swimming in the sea.
As the images themselves aren't that interesting - in general distant points on a fairly bland background are unlikely to be - I have included the intersection of lines that I added later in Photoshop.
![](https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/img/b/R29vZ2xl/AVvXsEijYpIo_UZFdg-3Vgy4Wxo1Wm35gmMKxnPLuSB4ewzPdegS0tJBDMKV1PpmykdB1ak_jfQtsWpbUPlPQkSl6t1sU9nWkXN56VKA3RSeH_hQuk996rdWmi7k78KQV0CzN91iEzhARoccQYA/s320/project+17+-+3a.jpg)
Placing her centrally in the frame makes her look rather lost and aimless; there's no sense of direction, where she is going to or where she has come from.
![](https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/img/b/R29vZ2xl/AVvXsEhsqCijG7ybAxYnmegUZkThVm-yPjNkgvcwrAt0kEXCpzcTUoOZeiQeTk4z5lTHa3Sun65mYjkqxufqwPu8yHGTUb4Fb76gtXosClL1FZvDF7BUYAolnuvm5ZcAbYyPHZY6_Pd-S5Q9pH8/s320/project+17+-+2a.jpg)
This I think is the most successful because her swimming parallel to the beach "into" the picture provides a sense of direction and implies that she still has some way to go, providing an element of movement.
![](https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/img/b/R29vZ2xl/AVvXsEhKDvIDqoiIE28KzWVMkMThVEgiElTIuSepdlZd3CnjLHbHjfd2qE3b-4RYq2NrrsRLYS9tcNAukVjbfvM0y1avtyQ8TRiurAsgbRcKfeqL_7W8MFh7uSXk2qh6wwn0DDH9vYvXecFd7tY/s320/project+17+-+1a.jpg)
I had thought that by positioning her on the left hand side of the frame it would appear as if she had already swum across the frame. Which I think it does, but it is less satisfying - as if the story has been told and we are too late for it.